so perfectly still..
walking amongst broken trees
after the fierce storm
on the other shore
across the river -- tell me:
is bamboo the same?
GJJIM wrote:Very expressive haiku Rune.
古池や 蛙飛こむ 水のをと

RuneTheChookcha wrote:古池や 蛙飛こむ 水のをと
All wrong!..
ancient pond -- all dry!
little frog a bit confused
the gentle splash -- failed
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